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Cordial Deconstruction of Neil deGrasse Tyson’s SIUE Talk

Posted by Karl Withakay on December 8, 2011

EDIT 12-12-11  I encourage you to read the comments at the end of this post, including one by Neil deGrasse Tyson himself!  Based on some of the constructive comments and criticisms I’ve gotten here and on Facebook, I’m backing off on the average criticism a bit, but I am leaving it in the post for the purpose of integrity and not pretending like I didn’t say something I did say.

Some of my friends and I went to see Neil deGrasee Tyson speak at SIUE last night (12-7-11).  His talk was very somewhat similar (~25% the same) to his keynote address given at TAM 9 from Outer Space last July, and he made a couple of statements (one of which was repeated from TAM9) that I thought were worthy of a little Cordial Deconstruction.

I know it seems disingenuous to preface a criticism of someone by stating how much you like them, but I’m still going to preface this with the statement that I’m a big fan of Neil deGrasee Tyson, and relish every opportunity to hear him speak, but I did have  problems with a couple of the things he said last night.

An Average Mistake

Dr. Tyson went through a series of slides showing statements made by various people that demonstrate a lack of understanding of science and or mathematics, but his criticism of one of the statements was not very well thought out, in my opinion.  I don’t remember the exact quote, but the essence of the statement was “half of all students are below average”, and Dr. Tyson’s criticism was that this statement was so definitively self obvious as to not require stating.  He said that it was kind of the whole point of average, and that half of any sample would always be below average since average represents the middle.  I know Dr. Tyson understands the concepts of median, mean, and mode, but in spite of that, he apparently didn’t think through his criticism of the statement in that slide.  He made the same point at TAM9, and he apparently hasn’t revised it since then.  It’s just not correct to say that half of any set will always be below average.

Before I can go any further, we have to determine what someone means when they say average.  The most common use of that term is in regards to the arithmetic mean, which is when you add up all the values and divide by the number of values.

I’ll use a simple hypothetical situation with math simple enough to be done without a calculator.  Let’s say I administer a ten question exam to ten students.  Nine students score a perfect 10, and one student scores a perfect 0.

The mean score is 9 ((9*10+0)/10).  In this example using mean for average, 1 student (10%) of the sample scored below average, and 9 students (90%) scored above average.

Sometimes, one might be referring to the median value when they use the term average.

From Wikipedia:

 “Median is described as the numerical value separating the higher half of a sample, a population, or a probability distribution, from the lower half”

By definition would seem to fit Dr. Tyson’s statement.

However, I see two problems here.  Firstly, while it may not be technically incorrect to intend median when referring to the average value, the typical understanding of what is meant by average is the arithmetic mean.  In my opinion, in order to avoid confusion, the use of the word average with general audiences should usually be restricted to refer to the arithmetic mean, and one should say median when they mean median.

The other problem is that even median doesn’t always result in half of a given sample being below average.

Also from Wikipedia:

“At most, half the population have values less than the median, and, at most, half have values greater than the median. If both groups contain less than half the population, then some of the population is exactly equal to the median.”

In the above example, when following the rules used to determine the median value, it comes out to be 10.  Using median for average, 10% of the students are still below average, while 90% are average, and nobody is above average.

There are other things that one could intend when using the term average, such as mode, but these uses would be even more uncommon and really need to be specified when intended.

Initial Mistake

Dr. Tyson also made what in my opinion, was an even grosser misstatement regarding the New Horizons probe to Pluto and the Kuiper Belt.  (To clarify, it was unquestionably a factual misstatement; it is my opinion that the severity of this misstatement is larger than that of his comment about averages.)

He stated that New Horizons was the fastest thing we had ever sent anywhere, and it would eventually overtake the Voyager probes as the most distant man made objects from the Earth.  This is factually incorrect, though there is a grain of truth at the heart of this statement.

While it is true that the New Horizons probe achieved the highest launch velocity of any craft so far, left Earth faster than any other mission or probe, and had the highest initial solar escape trajectory, it neither has the record for highest maximum velocity (the Helios probes hold that distinction), nor is it traveling faster than Voyager 1.  While New Horizons had a higher initial velocity than Voyager 1, Voyager’s velocity was boosted by gravitational slingshots with outer planets to a higher final velocity than New Horizon’s, and New Horizons will never overtake Voyager 1 as the most distant man made object form the Earth (or Sun).

Footnote Acknowledgement of Personal Fallibility

Normally, when I Deconstruct something, I like to be able to review it several times, so I can be sure my Deconstruction is valid, and I am not missing something that would invalidate my criticisms, but the talk last night was live, I can’t review a video of it, and I didn’t take any notes. (Notes would only help me remember things I noticed at the time and would not allow me to look for things that I may have missed anyway.)  As a result, this post was written based on my recall and understanding of what Dr. Tyson said last night (and last July), and is therefore subject to various limitations that could leave me in error in regards to my Deconstruction of the two points discussed in this post.  I therefore acknowledge the possibility that I may have misheard, misunderstood, or improperly recalled the points put forth by Dr. Tyson, and I could be off base on one or both of my criticisms, which is one of the reasons why I allow commenting on my posts, and I invite any relevant commentary anyone might have to add.

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 7 Season 4, Wallflower

Posted by Karl Withakay on November 18, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

Transfer That Man to the Fringe Division, ASAP!

The officer gets a little spooked, and he discharges the entire magazine of his Beretta 92F with no target in sight and no concern where the bullets might end up.  He’s definitely Fringe material.

Gun Notes

The officer discharged only 4 rounds, which means that starting with one in the chamber, he had only 3 rounds in a 15 round magazine.

Also, the slide did not lock back on the last round like it should have, and the officer pulled the trigger a fifth time on an empty chamber.  Before it was mentioned the he emptied his entire clip (see below on that), I considered the possibility that the fifth round was a dud, and he had not emptied the magazine, but the dialog nixed that possibility.  Perhaps the officer had a low quality magazine with a weak spring and intentionally did not fully load the magazine to prevent over compressing the spring, but if your magazine can’t reliably feed a full load of rounds , it’s a liability and needs to be replaced or resprung.  A weak magazine spring is a common cause of slide lock failures.

Magazine Clippings

A clip is a device (usually a bent strip of metal) that holds rounds of ammunition to facilitate loading certain firearm magazines.  A magazine is a device that holds and feeds ammunition in a gun.  The Beretta 92F has a detachable 15 round box magazine and does not use clips.  Most modern pistols designed after WW I do not use clips at all.

Revisiting White Fright

I’ve covered this before, but despite Walter’s credulity on the subject, fright can not turn hair white.  Hair is not living, and no chemical process in the body can affect its color once it is grown.

Also, I don’t believe fright can make you go albino either.  You can go momentarily pale if the blood flushes from your face, but that’s not the same as loosing your skin pigment, and you really wouldn’t be any paler than your average corpse.  Fright certainly won’t cause your eyes to go red.

If It Bleeds, We Can Kill It

Chromatophores and the animals that have them are pretty cool, but they’re not Harry Potter invisibility cloaks.  They can blend into and with backgrounds, but they cannot become transparent such that you can look right through them.

MayI Please Borrow The Multiverse Manipulator Sometime, Broyles?

Broyles won’t even let Peter walk around in public without an armed escort to limit his interaction with other people.  Does Peter really think they will let him play around with the big, scary machine built to destroy universes?

Quote #1

Walter:

“Tell Broyles, Science has no price tag!”

Wait, What…?

U-Gene originally had a pigment problem, and was treated with chromatophores that made him able to be invisible by dynamically blending in with the environment around him, but he’s not bending light around him like an invisibility cloak would, so he should be creating shadows.  Also, no explanation was giving as to how these cells could accurately reproduce 3D lifelike images in real time capable of making him not noticeable to people looking in his direction, if not right at him.  That’s some major processing power to do that.

Additionally, if his original problem was a lack of pigment, why wouldn’t stealing other people’s pigment be a workable substitute cure (at least in the Fringaverse) in place of the chromatophores?  Yes it was a genetic deformity so I would expect he would need to constantly replenish his pigment, but I don’t see why it would revert him to his original, pre-cure state and kill him

Was He Being Politically Correct?

Why target Caucasians for acquiring pigment; wouldn’t U-Gene have had to kill fewer people if he went after darker skinned people?

Magic UV Light

That mouse didn’t fluoresce under the UV light, it simply became visible as if a normal light was shining on it.  Apparently the super chromatophores absorb UV light and re-emit it at the exact same wavelength of light that would be normally be reflected by normal cells when regular visible spectrum white light shines on them.  Also, apparently U-Gene’s and the mouse’s hair is made up of these chromatophores as it’s also invisible.  I wonder about the mouse droppings.

Bad Plot Convenience Theater

Olivia’s line about the search taking too long and them needing to split up was entirely contrived to separate her on her own; it made no practical sense.

What’s the hurry?  Isn’t a slow, methodical search better?  Why not at least break up into teams of two?  Isn’t it good to have someone backing you up?  If I ran the Fringe division, I’d have a rule:   Always have a partner, and never leave your wingman under any circumstances.  No teams smaller than two people.

Olivia Dunham, Elite Government Agent

Is anybody keeping count of how many times Olivia has lost or carelessly discharged her firearm over the years?

Quote #2

Nina:

“Your life is an experiment.  You have to find out where you belong, find your own place in the world.”

Things We have Learned In This Episode

Massive Dynamic used to be called Kelvin Genetics, and it had an insurance subsidiary called Cypronic Inc.

Nina Sharp in this continuity appears to be evil, though there is good reason to believe she may have been evil in the other continuity as well.

Olivia appears to have a pain killer problem, and she has antibiotics (Ampicillin) in her medicine cabinet.

Olivia and NerdLee may be hooking up at some point.  Obviously there’s a mutual interest there, and Peter seems OK with it, believing that this is not his Olivia.

U-Gene was Experiment 69545

I Will Not Be Pushed, Filed, Stamped, Indexed, Briefed, Debriefed or Numbered. My Life is My Own.

Did anybody else get a little “The Prisoner” vibe at the end there for a moment?  (Skip to the 1 min 50 sec mark if you don’t want to watch the whole video.)

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 6 Season 4, All Those We’ve Left Behind

Posted by Karl Withakay on November 11, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

 What’s Old is New Again, Again/ A Self Referential Plot Point

I really liked the plot to this episode the first time I saw it, when it was the Window Of Opportunity episode of Stargate SG1.  Sure you can say that story’s plot was derived from and inspired by the movie Groundhog Day, but this episode’s plot was a virtual copy of the plot of Window of Opportunity.  An elite, secret government team comes across a series of time loops/ bubbles that are eventually determined to be caused by a scientist/engineer seeking to reunite himself with his wife who has been lost to him through illness.

But Does it Go to Eleven?

I guess in the new timeline, perhaps Drexler MCD21 Handheld Molecular Cohesion Detectors are widely available.  Even if it isn’t well written, it’s nice that it comes with a real, substantial manual rather than a CD-ROM or just a hyperlink to the website for instructions.

Alpha Radiation 101

Peter:

“If I’m the causing some sort of cosmic disruption, then there’s going to be heightened levels of alpha radiation, but I’m going to need the full spectrum of EM waves, not just the…”

First of all, Alpha radiation is particle radiation (specifically Helium-4 nuclei emitted from atomic nuclei via alpha decay), not electromagnetic radiation or EM waves.  Second of all, based on what science is Peter so sure that his “cosmic disruption” would be causing alpha radiation rather than any other form of radiation, particle or EM?

Peter Bishop Came Unstuck in Time

Peter has a few Billy Pilgrim moments in this episode.

Neutron Radiation 101

Neutron radiation is very penetrating and very hazardous.  It is considered to be the most hazardous form of radiation.  If there was strong enough neutron radiation to cause embrittlement of the metal bumper, it would have been strong enough to kill the passengers and also induce radioactivity in the exposed materials.   Also, Peter is wrong that neutron radiation has to be produced by “human technology”.

-Neutrons are produced from cosmic radiation interacting with the Earth’s atmosphere.

-Neutrons are produced when low Z materials like Beryllium are exposed to alpha particle sources like Radium through α,n nuclear reactions.

-Neutrons can also be produced if a gamma ray photon has an energy exceeding the binding energy of an atomic nucleus and strikes it.

-Neutrons are produced through natural fission.  Sustained natural fission occurred about 1.7 billion years ago in the Oklo natural reactor.

-Very high neutron fluxes are produced in supernova explosions.

Honestly, I didn’t Know this Until I Looked it Up, but…

A Fibonacci spiral is not a perfect golden spiral, though it is an approximation of one and is often confused for one.

Quote of the Show

Walter:

“You can’t just walk from the present into the past, shattering the laws of physics.”

No, of course not..  I mean, it’s perfectly reasonable that you can create a time bubble, shattering the laws of physics, but walk through the time bubble, no that would be laughably ridiculous.

Faraday 101

That was not anything remotely approaching a Faraday cage.  Peter would have to have been nearly fully enclosed in a metal mesh, shell, or foil wrap.  That harness seemed more like some soft of counter field generator rather than a Faraday cage.  Faraday cages protect against electric fields and certain wavelengths of electromagnetic fields.  Are the time bubbles created by EM fields?

How Important is that Right Hand, Peter? (It’s like a Whole ‘Nother Person)

I might have tested my “Faraday Harness” with something other than my right hand.  Maybe my left hand, my left foot, or perhaps a small stick would have been my choice.

Did Walter Invent the Flat Panel TV in 1991?

Why was there a flat panel TV in a house that supposedly hadn’t been occupied for 20 years?

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 5 Season 4, Novation

Posted by Karl Withakay on November 4, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

NüFringe Retrocontinuity Clarifications

-Olivia’s mother died when she was young, and she and her sister were raised by Nina Sharp.

-William Bell is still dead.

Cancer 101

I don’t think the writers understand what cancer is.  Cancer is basically a condition of uncontrolled cellular replication.  Malcolm’s research into encouraging cellular replication would be unlikely to have any direct application to cancer treatment except possibly to replace tissue or organs removed by surgery to remove the cancer, but it would not be able to cure malignancies or metastases (kill or eliminate cancer cells).   The problem in cancer is not primarily with replacing tissue; it is with removing the cancerous cells.  The research would be useless in curing cancer.

Mad Scientists Have Ethics?

William Bell, the man who collaborated with Walter in experimenting on children with an experimental, mind altering drug  (Cortexiphan), shut down a project into cellular replication for the purpose of tissue replacement due to ethical concerns?  WTF?

I’m Gonna Need Some Pliers and, uh, a Set of 30-Weight Ball Bearings

That sure was a neat trick where Peter hacked into a Cisco digital phone system just by crossing a few wires.  You can’t hot wire VOIP.

Did Gas Pumps Get Faster and Gas Get Cheaper?

Malcolm spent about 10 seconds pumping gas and the final reading on the pump was $11.16 and 14 gallons (though he paid $20), which puts gas at 79 cents a gallon and the flow rate at 1.4 gallons/ second.  If I’m ever driving in Rutland Vermont, I’ll make sure to fill up at Newhart Gas, where the fuel flows fast and cheap!

Genetics 101

It would take more than a complete copy of a persons’ genome to create an identical copy of that person.  It is often said the genes are the blueprints of an organism, but that’s not quite accurate.  Genes are more like a cross between a blueprint and a building code.  Many factors affect the final product.  In the analogy, available materials, contractors, worker skill & motivation, weather, etc all affect the form of the final product.  For a human being there are likewise numerous environmental factors and inputs that all affect the final product.  Even identical twins do not have identical fingerprints.

When Is a Copy Not a Copy?

Let’s say that the shape shifters used more than just DNA to copy their victims.  Peter stated that they replicate their victims down to the molecular level.  If that were the case, then they would have brains identical to their victims and think, feel, and act just like their victims, unless the data drive over rode the brain to some extent.  Of course, if they were identical down to the molecular level, they would have no interface to the tech.

Cylon Problem

Peter in regards to the enhanced shape shifters assuming the form of anyone they wanted to:

“Short of performing surgery to find those memory disks, you would have no way of knowing”

Really, there are partially metallic, electronic objects located inside these bodies and they can’t be detected by:

-X-Ray

-MRI

-Metal Detector

-EMF Meter?

Further more, they should be able to confirm identity by EEG.  (Fringe has established the ability to identify a persons’ unique brainwave signature)

Think Fast

Seeing as how at the end, Malcolm seemed convinced that Bell was right about his work, why didn’t Malcolm just throw the vial to the ground instead of trying to run away with it?

Shape Shifter 101/ Fool Me Once, Shame on You…

How stupid is Olivia?  I mean, she’s encountered shape shifters before, and she fell for the same trick again!  Did anyone watching not know the wounded agent was likely the shifter right away?  Anytime a hostile shape shifter leaves your sight, assume the next person you encounter is that same shape shifter!  I weep for the safety of our universe.

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 4 Season 4, Subject 9

Posted by Karl Withakay on October 14, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

RetroTech

Why did Walter’s super multi-angle photo setup consist pretty much entirely of various models of Polaroid instant cameras, apparently somehow converted to digital?

Magnetic Personality

Walter to Astrid:

“Find anything metal, so they can test whether those objects have become magnetized.”

For any of those objects not made out of ferromagnetic materials, that would indeed be extra Fringe worthy, as only ferromagnetic materials can be magnetized.  Not all metals are capable of being magnetized or attracted to magnets.  Dental amalgam does not contain ferromagnetic materials and is not attracted to magnets.

Bug Out

Mysophobia is the fear of germs and contamination.  Not that it would have eased Walter’s mind at all, but he should have known that urine is generally sterile, and poses little risk of germs.

Wild Wild West

Did the retcon eliminate all the other questionable firearms discharges by Olivia?  Because if not, you’d think they just revoke he firearms privileges by now and take her gun away.

First she blindly shoots out a window with no concern for what’s on the other side of the window, or where the bullet might ricochet to in an urban environment with many hard (ricochet prone) surfaces.  (I watched the scene in slow motion, and though she turns he head towards the window, she covers her eyes with her arms and does not see what’s on the other side of the window, and even if she did see the other side was clear, the ricochet problem still exists.).

Later, in the same episode, she fires her gun at an angle in the air without any concern for where the bullet might land.  (Although the Mythbusters proved you can fire a gun directly vertical with little fear of harm when the bullet lands, any angle will result in a ballistic trajectory and a potentially lethal landing.)  I’m surprised she doesn’t just shoot the bottle caps off of beer bottles and use her gun to turn off the lights like Homer Simpson.

Super Special Magnetic Powers

Not only is Peter’s energy capable of attracting non ferromagnetic metals, it is also capable of unlocking mailboxes in an apartment complex.

Violating Causality

Walter:

“I witnessed effect before cause.”

Effect proceeding cause would appear to violate causality, and would imply faster than light phenomenon/ time travel or retrocausality.  If a particle travels faster than light, it would travel back in time and appear to flow from effect to cause.

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Fringe Deconstruction Possibly Delayed

Posted by Karl Withakay on October 14, 2011

This week’s Fringe Deconstruction may be delayed until late tonight or tomorrow morning, depending on when I get home tonight from the Haunted Paintball Hayride that I’m going on with my friends.

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 3 Season 4, Alone in the World

Posted by Karl Withakay on October 7, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

Return of Prop convenience Theater

It sure was handy that the doctor was using a shiny, chrome clipboard so Walter could see Peter in it, wasn’t it?

Fringe Division, Crack Biosafety Unit

Two children die within hours of exposure to an unknown contaminant, probably an unknown pathogen for which no treatment protocol exists and for which the method of transmission is unknown, and nobody examining the scene is in hazmat gear and the bodies are not handled with any precautions whatsoever and just sent to a morgue and a basement lab at Harvard?  This is a textbook case for Biosfety level 4 biocontainment precautions, the highest level there is.  The investigators at the scene should have been in Level A hazmat gear with self contained breathing apparatus and the bodies should have been delivered to a BSL-4 lab with showers, a vacuum room, a UV light room, and other safety precautions designed to destroy all traces of any biohazard as well as have multiple airlocks that are secured to prevent both doors opening at the same time.  Additionally all air and water service going to and coming from a the lab would undergo similar decontamination procedures to eliminate the possibility of an accidental release.

Also, that’s probably not a good time for Nerlee’s likely first biosafety situation.

You don’t Need All the Evidence, Do You?

It’s not like there was any possibility than only one of the bodies would have some important piece of evidence like the method of first transmission of the pathogen or toxin.   Go ahead and save some time and money and only send one to the lab and send the other straight to the morgue.

Quote #1

-written in the kid’s notebook.

“I wonder if I wish my birthday would be just how I dream it”

Lambda Lambda Lambda

A lambda sensor is an actual oxygen sensor.

A Fungus Among Us

Cordyceps are very interesting fungi.  They are all endoparasitoids that prey mainly on insects and arthropods.  They invade and replace host tissue, and some species can even influence host behavior to spread it spores, as with zombie ants.  It’s always more interesting to me when there’s some real, scientific basis for the “science” in Fringe.

Brain Fart

But the part about the fungi forming large neuron like cells to produce a large, thinking brain was just over the top.

In addition to the fundamental absurdity of fungal cells being able to function as neurons, a human brain has about 100 billion neurons in it. If we do some back of the envelope calculations, let’s assume that “neuron” in the lab was typical and was about 4”X4” square (just to speed up and simplify calculations).   If there were just 1 billion of them in Gus’s brain, that would cover approximately 2500 acres of land/surface or about 4 square miles.

All Things Being Equal

This timeline and the old timeline should be identical up to the point that Walter and Peter fell through the ice and the observer did or didn’t save Peter.

Biosafety Level Zero

At least have some Draino ready to pour down the sink if you’re not going to use a BSL-4 lab.

Holy Crap, We’re Doomed (or Doosmed)

It’s unbelievable the amount of caution our Fringe team constantly didn’t take when working around the fungi.  If these people are half of all that stands between two universes and certain doom, the alterverse’s team will need to carry the full burden of saving everything by themselves.

Get A Head

Why bother wearing the fire protection suits when using flame throwers if you’re not going to wear anything on your head?

Ooh, Piece of Candy!

I love that Astrid knows Walter well enough to instantly know he wanted a Popsicle after he mentioned not turning the boy into one and then paused and said “Oh, Astrid…”

Other Options?

I guess it never occurred to Walter to try putting the kid in a medically induced coma or anesthetizing the relevant part of his brain before jumping straight the idea of lobotomizing him?  Presumably it didn’t need to be permanent; he just needed to interrupt the link until the organism was dead.  It’s a good thing he came up with a plan B in time.

Get Him a Red Uniform, Oh, Never Mind, Too Late

I’m guessing I’m not the only one who saw the death of they guy administering the toxin coming, right?

Quote #2

Walter:

“I’ve seen the movie with the talking toys, oddly disturbing.”

Slow Down There, Let’s Not Jump to Any Conclusions

Walter:

“And all this time I thought that I was loosing my mind, that he was a figment of my psychosis.  I’m perfectly sane.”

Maybe he isn’t a figment of your psychosis, but I wouldn’t make any hasty conclusions about the other two parts.

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 2 Season 4, One Night in October

Posted by Karl Withakay on September 30, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

Retcon Changes/ Other Universe Details

The other universe’s Broyles (O’Broyles) is now alive, thanks to the Retcon.

Fauxlivia is still with Frank

Lincoln Lee still has the hots for Fauxlivia.

Charlie has hooked up with the hot bug lady.

Fauxlivia presumably has no child that she is aware of.  (I wonder if they’ll address her de-existed child at some point.)

How Do You Define “Mild”?

I don’t consider any sedative that renders you deeply enough unconscious  to be transported to another location without waking to be “mild”.

Iconic Image

I love the obvious homage to the classic ‘80s Maxell Commercial with Walter in the chair behind the speakers listening to loud music.

Wouldn’t It Make a Bit More Sense…

Rather than require Fauxlivia to wear a blond wig for an extended period of time, why not let her come over to our universe to escort Professor McClennan over to the other universe, have Olivia wear a red wig for a shorter period of time, or have a different agent escort him over?

Steak Out

Maybe it’s always been this way, or maybe it’s because of the Retcon, but where we have previously seen canned steak that is kept refrigerated in the alternaverse, now we have Steak dinner frozen meals in cardboard boxes similar to frozen meals here.

A Holmesian Leap of Logic or a House Moment?

OK, from the fact that the guy has 6 frozen steak dinners in his freezer and no food in the fridge, the professor determines that “Dinner is important to him.”, and “He hunts by day.”.  Is he aware that just because the box has the word “dinner” on it, it doesn’t mean you can’t eat it for lunch?  A lot of single guys’ fridges and freezers look a lot like his did; it doesn’t mean that dinner is especially important to them.

Did the Retcon Dumbify the Other Fringe Team?

How did it not occur to anyone that the professor might see something familiar to his life in the killer’s house?  He is after all, sort of the same person.

The Gig is Up

After the professor discovers the truth about the dual universes and Olivias, why does Fauxlivia bother to continue to wear the wig until returning to HQ?

I Know Him Like I Know Myself

Shouldn’t the professor have known what the killer’s reaction was going to be when he confronted him?  Maybe the prof was selfless and did know and hoped it would help the killer be a better person.  Maybe the professor tapped into his darker side and even knew the killer would commit suicide as a result linking with the professor’s mind.

Memories as Vitalistic Essence?

With a computer, when you move a file, you don’t really move the file.  You make a copy in a different location and delete the original file.  Memories are really just data stored in the brain. Either the process of transferring the memory destroys the original memory as a side effect, or the memories have some sort of vitalist essence such that they can be transferred like you move a physical object rather than the way you transfer data.

Obvious Peter Reference

Broyles responding to Olivia in regards to the professor retaining what he learned from Marjorie despite not remembering her,

“At the risk of sounding sentimental, I’ve always thought there were people who leave an indelible mark on your soul, an imprint that can never be erased.”

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Deconstruction Review of Fringe, Episode 1 Season 4, Neither Here Nor There

Posted by Karl Withakay on September 23, 2011

A Gold/Yellow Episode

As always, an episode synopsis will be found over at Scott’s Polite Dissent

Opening Theme Fringe Terms

The Fringe terms in the opening theme were:

Existence

Quantum Entanglement

Philosopher’s Stone

Psychometry

Viral Therapy

Ehthereal Plane

Gravitons

Time Paradox

Psychogenesis

Bilocation

Psychic Surgery

Transgenics

Existence, quantum entanglement, viral therapy, transgenics even gravitons aren’t really fringe science, though there could easily be fringe theories and applications of them and gravitons are purely hypothetical as of 2011.  Somehow I doubt this is what they meant by psychogenesis, and I’m wondering if they just thought it sounded fringey or they thought it meant psychic generation of abiogenic life.  I accept time paradoxes as fringe science.  The philosopher’s stone, psychometry, and bilocation are plain pseudoscience or prescience, and psychic surgery is outright fraud.

Continuity Questions

-Did Peter truly never exist at all, or did he die as a child in both universes?

-If Peter never existed at all, why did Walter start all of this if not to travel to the other universe to save Peter?

-What happened to Walter’s wife in this universe’s new continuity?

-How were the machines operated without a Peter or a Peter DNA source?

I’m sure there’s many more questions to be answered that I’m not thinking of off the top of my head.

Night of the Living Dead Pigeons

Is Walter trying to become Herbert West for birds?

Did Astrid back the Car Over Olivia’s Dog During Commercial?

It seems like Astrid is a field agent and Olivia’s partner at the start of the episode, but gets de facto replaced by NerdLee once he shows up at the lab.  My guess is that this will continue in future episodes with Astrid being demoted to Walter’s full time lab assistant from now on.

A Name Worthy of a Poorly Written Comic Book

What do the writers name a commuter that park and rides for her daily commute? Nadine Park, of course.  Why not just go with Carline Park-Ride?

Faith and Reason

NerdLee:

“He believed that everything happened for a reason.  I’m having a hard time believing that there’s a reason for this.”

Everything happens for a reason from the perspective of cause and effect.  The reason something happens is the deterministic cause of that thing.  I believe though, that NerdLee meant that everything happens for a purpose, as in an intentional, directed purpose.  Hey, nobody ever said anything about a good reason or that it has to be good for you.

Heavy Metal Poisoning

Hair loss can be caused by heavy metals like Thallium, Mercury poisoning can damage the kidneys,  and lead poisoning can cause gout.  I had my doubts about gout until I looked it up; you learn something new every day.  Zinc can be toxic in sufficient  amounts, but I don’t think it’s a particularly common problem, although someone apparently once ingested $4.25 in copper plated zinc pennies for some reason and died as a result.

You’re So Transparent

Being transparent sure makes it easier to hit a vein for an injection.  It probably makes a lot of medical diagnostic procedures easy as well as cutting down on radiation exposure  by eliminating a lot of X-rays.

Quote of the Show

Walter:

“People die.  It happens.  Sometimes they die twice.”

The Retcon Hasn’t Made Olivia a Better Agent.

How much closer was Olivia going to get to that suspect before she insisted he turn around, get on his knees, put his hands on his head and interlock his fingers, close enough for him to head butt her?  One episode into the retcon and she’s already been disarmed and nearly killed due to incompetence.

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Off to TAM9!

Posted by Karl Withakay on July 13, 2011

I wasn’t able to post last week as I got invited to Cardinals game at the last minute Wednesday, pushing Halo night to Thursday, which is my usual blogging night.

This week, I will be attending The Amazing Meeting in Las Vegas (if you don’t already have tickets, too bad- it’s sold out!), and will be unable to post again this week.

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